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Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:29 pm Post subject: |
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Next part for y'all!!
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Part11: An unexpected visiter.
As Jake caried pinks and purple suitczses back to the flat Nancy was keeping Sabrina stable, Nancy told Jake that he should meet them at the Dog so Sabrina could see Frankie; as Nancy opened the door for Sabrina there were banners up with "Welcome Home" on them; balloons tied to candles, at the sight of it all Sabrina cryed on Nancy's shoulder; Frankie walked up and hugged her grand-daughter.
Frankie: Hey, ssshhh you're s'pose to be happy not sad.
Sabrina: (Crying) I'm not sad im happy.
They walked up to the bar as Jake walked in.
Jake: Hey you, how would you like to pull some pints?
Sabrina: Realla?!!
Jake: Cource.
As they mucked around Nancy and Frankie laughed; but to an unawaiting Jake Sabrina pourd a pint over Jake's head.
Jake: (spitting out beer) OI!!
He tickled Sabrina as she squealed; as she squealed a blonde woman of about 25-26 walked in and saw Jake, she walked up to the bar and, got everyones attention.
Woman: Exuse me?
Jake: How may i help you?
The woman was shocked that Jake didn't recognise her.
Woman: I'm lookin for Jake Dean?
Jake: You found me, Oh Nance could you help Sabs with some custermors quick?
Nancy: Yeah sure.
Nancy walked round and Jake pulled her into a passionate kiss.
Nancy: Jake, you have a custermor.
Jake spun round as the woman continued talking.
Woman: My name's Mia Rodgers, I want full custody over Sabrina, Jake.
When she heard those words Sabrina went over to Nancy for protection.
Sabrina: M--uumm whats she talking about?
Nancy: I don't know, but i think thats your real mum.
Mia: Sabrina my baby.
She walked round to hug her but was stopped by Frankie.
Frankie: Look here Mia what would you say if Sabrina wanted to stay with Jake?
Mia: YEah right.
Sabrina: But i do, i love my mum and dad i'm happy.
Mia: I'm your mum!
Nancy: No I'm her leagal mum; and Jake fiance.
As Charlie began to cry Nancy picked him up.
Charlie: MUMMA!!
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Mia's turned up and Charlie said his first word but was it the right one? Keep reading to find out. _________________ Lou
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-x-Jancy-x-4eva-x-
Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 7:30 pm Post subject: |
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Next quickie part.
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part12:
Nancy looked at Charlie as he held his arms out at Nancy; Sabrina took Charlie of Nancy with Nancy still in the same place.
Sabrina: I'll take this one home, and put him to bed.
Jake: Alright, I'll take your suitcases up later. oh and by the way take it easy you just got out of hospital.
Sabrina: Yeah bout that could Josh stay over for a while, he wants some alone time, with me afer being in hospital for 18 months.
Jake: Cource he can, he can stay as long as he wants to.
Sabrina: Oh, can he sleep in my bed, i might fall out of bed and he'll keep me safe.
Jake: I guess so but no funny stuff.
Sabrina: Yay!!
As Sabrina and Charlie left Sabrina called Josh and told him the good news, and that he could come over there now; back at the Dog everyone was ignoring Mia.
Jake: So Mrs Dean - to be when do you want the wedding?
Nancy: Well we have been engaged for almost 2 years now i guess and 6 months passing will do i need to get the dress and everything.
Jake: I know, but until then...
Jake pulled Nancy into a kiss she couldn't let go of him, as much as she tryed she finally gave up. She eventually had the stregnth and let go of him and serve a custermor; back at the flat Sabrinaand Josh were lying in bed and had and hour to them selves and when they woke up clothes were all over the floor. _________________ Lou
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Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 24 Location: Scotland
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-x-Jancy-x-4eva-x-
Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:19 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah well its possible if she's nearly 14!
lol  _________________ Lou
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I'm blonde, a leo and i can scream and shout but sometimes i'm nice but most of the time im a full british Bitch! |
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-x-Jancy-x-4eva-x-
Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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Now heres a big twist for you all!!
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Part13:
As Josh and Sabrina gazed into eachothers eyes, Josh and the whole room started going fuzzy and turning black; Sabrina opened her eyes and there infront of her were balloons some with Happy birthday on them and others with Get Well Soon; at the sight of the balloons Sabrina looked around at her surroundings machines and drips all around her; she was still in hospital, Jake walkled into the room holding a plastic cup of coffee and saw Sabrina, bolt up right and shocked.
Jake: Hey, are you alright?
Sabrina: Yeah but balloons Happy Birthday? Whats going on?
Jake: It's your 14th birthday.
Sabrina: WHAT! What happened to my 12th and 13th?!
Jake: you've been in here for a long time, they were going to call you dead until you squeezed my hand hand 2 years ago.
Sabrina looked around and saw a walking Charlie and Nancy come through the door.
Sabrina: Charlie!!
Charlie: Bissta!
Sabrina held Charlie close, because she knew she was lucky to be alive. _________________ Lou
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I'm blonde, a leo and i can scream and shout but sometimes i'm nice but most of the time im a full british Bitch! |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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Awwww I'd kill myself if i missed 2 yrs of my life.
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Part14:
As Sabrina sat on the side of her hospital bed she looked down at the new clothes Steph had bourght her; then Jake came in and gave Sabrina a hand getting to the taxi, whilst walking through the villiage alot of people didn't recognise Sabrina. But unfortuneately the Valentines were walking through Hollyoaks and the worst thing of all Sonny Valentine had come back from visiting his aunt; Calvin saw the Dean clan and got ready for Sonny to storm over there, and his calculations were correct Sonny as soon as you could say Intensive Care was walking over to them with a glareing look in his eyes.
Sonny: Awww look, Jake's finally adopted a daughter to look after Charlie whilst he goes to the pub.
Nancy: OI! Back of Valentine, Sabrina only came out of hospital today after being in there for 2 years.
Sabrina (whispering): Mum please don't fight i just wanna go ome and sleep in my own bed.
Jake: C'mon I'll take you home Miss Hayton Dean.
Sabrina: Dad stop it! Soon it'll be Sabrina Dean when you and mum get hitched; wait are you hitched?
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Do you think Jake and Nancy would do that to Sabrina?
Soz only short part. _________________ Lou
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I'm blonde, a leo and i can scream and shout but sometimes i'm nice but most of the time im a full british Bitch! |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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Heres the next part for you all.
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Part15:
Sabrina gazed at them worringly, the same things going round her mind over and over, "They got married whilst in hospital didn't they!"; tears welling up in her saphire blue eyes, and every second seemed like a minute, she blinked as the tears fell from her eyes as she began to panic and shake her head.
Sabrina: No... no! This can't be happening; not now not to me!
Grabbing onto her arms for protection, a hooded figure was looking at them, as another hooded figure joined her.
Woman1: Your plan is working perfectly Becs.
Woman2: Why thank you Mia, i think it's about time the Deans saw Becca Dean again.
As they approached the group Mia and Becca took of the hoods and everyone gazed at them in horror.
Nancy: Becca?!!
Jake: Mia?!?!
Charlie started crying, Nancy picked him up. He held his arms out to Nancy.
Charlie: Mumma!
Nancy: sssshhh, it's OK mummy's here don't cry.
Jake: Sabrina, 2 things 1, me and Nance wouldn't get married without you well and active and 2 go back to the flat or Drive'n'Buy to see Josh, Rhys or Neville and tell them you're OK, oh and take your mum and brother to see Tone and Jacqui for me.
Sabrina: OK, by the way... thats 3 things.
Jake: Just, go cheeky.
Sabrina smiled and skipped along to Drive'n'Buy to see if Josh was working. Nancy looked at Jake with a look saying "I don't want to leave you", Jake kissed Nancy passionately, and watched her walk to Il Gnosh.
Jake: Now then you 2 what do you want.... _________________ Lou
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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_________________ Lou
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I'm blonde, a leo and i can scream and shout but sometimes i'm nice but most of the time im a full british Bitch! |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 34 Location: On a date with Jake!<3
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Heres another part for ya!!
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Part16:
Walking away from Jake knowing he was going to get back with Becca was the hardest thing to do for Nancy, she kept looking over her shoulder wanting to run back to him but her feet wouldn't let her; as determine as she was she went up to Jacqui and gave Charlie to her and ran of to see Jake; as Jake heard running footsteps getting louder and louder he turned round as Nancy flung her arms round his neck.
Nancy: Please Jake, don't leave me!
Jake: Hey, sssssssssshhhhh i would never leave you for anyone.
Nancy buried her face into his chest as Jake put his arms around her, all he wanted to do is wake up and thing would be back to normal Sabrina dancing around the flat and him, Nance and Charlie all laughing at her like one big happy family.
But was that all about to change?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUN _________________ Lou
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I'm blonde, a leo and i can scream and shout but sometimes i'm nice but most of the time im a full british Bitch! |
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JancyForeverx
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 24 Location: Scotland
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:50 pm Post subject: |
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LOL thanks lou  your fics comin on brilliant! i see Beccas still alive then :O or is this a dream hes having lol :p? |
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emzie21 Site Admin

Joined: 27 May 2006 Posts: 207 Location: Gardening with Jake! :D
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:38 pm Post subject: |
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great fic x |
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